For my research paper I plan to expand
my first essay on my analytical response to the novel stitches. I want to explain
the effects on children growing up with a mentally ill mother, and how mental
illnesses can affect the parent’s ability to provide a good environment for
their children. I plan on revising my stitches essay by proving that children
dealing with a mentally ill mother have more life problems and face more
discrimination. I plan to prove that not all children follow in the same footsteps
as their parents. Some children with mentally ill mothers do not always end up
with the same mental illness as their mother. I will prove that some children
take a different route in life turning their bad situation into something good.
In my first essay I discussed how David’s dysfunctional upbringing allowed him
to undergo self discovery, and find his inner voice. With my research I want to
discuss the difficulties with living with a mother suffering from a mental
illness. I will talk about the neglect and abuse David went through due to his mother’s
illness and careless mistakes. I will begin to expand my essay, but
first I will need to revise the original stitches essay by fixing comma splices
and run on sentences.
I
found a couple of article one is the “Experiences of motherhood when suffering
from mental illness” from the International
Journal of Mental Health. I want to expand my stitches essay by explaining how
difficult it is growing up with a mentally unstable parent. I will prove that
David Small’s mother actions were caused by her untreated mental illness and
her own dark past. I found a passage that would help support my
statement it reads, “There is strong evidence that mothers with mental illness
struggle with conflicting and distressing feelings, due to dual demands related
to motherhood and the challenges of living with mental illness” (Abrams &
Curran 2009; Rørtveit et al. 2010).
It looks like you have a good start on gathering research materials.
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